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for Fallen

by crazyundeadfairy

person altalemur
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It was a bit splotchy for all the flashbacks. They did make it more emotional, though. Not a whole lot of action in this chapter. Can't wait for next one.
person actoratheart
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohthankgod he's not truly dead... T_T

PLEASE DON'T STOP!! this is so good!
person babydoll786
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter!! I am dying to know what happens next!!!!
person Angsty Freedom Fighter
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bum bum buuum--cliffy~!! ^__^ You will continue and grant us all a great chapter for four, will you not~? *brandishing lightsaber* Of COURSE you will~! I await eagerly, but won't hold my breath for fear of not being able to get to read the next part! I shall silently cheer you on, or if you'd like, I'll loudly cheer you on. I'm really enjoying this twist of events for the RotS storyline. T_T But I am so sad for Obi, boo hoo. Anyways, enough ranting from me--you keep on writing, wh00t!!

--Angst
person imaPseudonym
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.. Now 'that' is a kick-arse cliff hanger. More please? Soon?

*offers cookies*
person babydoll786
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story and very well written!!
person babydoll786
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it especially the flashbacks!!
person Alta Lemur
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. One of the exceptionally good SW fanfics I've read. Very emotional and well written characters.
person BlackRaven13
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was so sad and wonderful and HOT! I loved it. You had me crying! CRYING!!!!
person shada
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is Great, nice originality, and love how you really show the feelings for each of the charactors can't wait to read more