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for Bringing it down

by NicolinaN

person yarvarni
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's our big sweet teddy bear killer!
person venes
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no hes gone? ohhh....no way....its funny, ur story, like made me cringe with the pain of the birth, then everything....i was like 'ooooooowwwwwee....not having a child....' hahah ur story had an effect! well...among others lol. was a good chapter
person Death
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. Dude. Riddick was being sweet. lol. Please update soon! ^_~
person yarvarni
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.....Riddick with a little baby......
person Erica
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More
person Eryn
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow- wicked cliffhanger. So baby boy or girl???????
person Death
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Coolness! ^_~ That so rocked! Please update soon!
person Pandorag
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love the conflicting emotions. Keeps me wanting...
person venes
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha you consider me your loyal reader...i feel...great! lol that was a heavy chapter. good but heavy
person Dee
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I love it. I can't wait for more. You've got Riddick Pegged. I so love it.