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for Bringing it down

by NicolinaN

person venes
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter yay! cant wait for the next!!
person starrbrina
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice twist bring Jack into can wait to see more.
person Death
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! Damn just Jack.....-_- lol! BUT Riddick is coming so I'm happy. lol! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_~
person venes
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont get that carried away...do i? oh welp. short n sweet this time. continue tis good
person Yoplait Tubes ROCK
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice chapter! Look'n forward to Riddicks meeting with Jack and Karyn.

Is Riddick goin to get with anyone permanently?Or maybe even two babes?(Jack and Karyn)
person venes
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, i though u were going to end it there...of course then i would have to flame u to ash....ash...please dnt end it soon...i like it too much for it to end....for the love of god! noooo i wish it never ended...but all good things come to an end. sorry havnt been reviewing...had exams....but love it so far....exellent
person Lily
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really know how to keep the suspense up... please continue soon!
person yarvarni
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo I can't wait to see when those eyes meet :-)
person Death
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_~ Please update soon! I want to know if those eyes are Riddick's or not.
person eryn
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked cliffhanger, loving the story hurry and post the next section.