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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter yay! cant wait for the next!!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice twist bring Jack into can wait to see more.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! Damn just Jack.....-_- lol! BUT Riddick is coming so I'm happy. lol! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_~
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont get that carried away...do i? oh welp. short n sweet this time. continue tis good
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice chapter! Look'n forward to Riddicks meeting with Jack and Karyn.
Is Riddick goin to get with anyone permanently?Or maybe even two babes?(Jack and Karyn)
Is Riddick goin to get with anyone permanently?Or maybe even two babes?(Jack and Karyn)
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, i though u were going to end it there...of course then i would have to flame u to ash....ash...please dnt end it soon...i like it too much for it to end....for the love of god! noooo i wish it never ended...but all good things come to an end. sorry havnt been reviewing...had exams....but love it so far....exellent
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really know how to keep the suspense up... please continue soon!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo I can't wait to see when those eyes meet :-)
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^_~ Please update soon! I want to know if those eyes are Riddick's or not.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wicked cliffhanger, loving the story hurry and post the next section.