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by Closet

person xidaer
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG roxxors! Wowser gee bob that was amazing. just so stunned and wow. Yummy-ness! *calming breath* yes, you totally rock, that was great the whole story just made the end pop out and just be oh so much better than if there had been no plot. much luv!
person Ronald
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honey, this was INCREDIBLY HOT. I bow before your greatness. A sequel is in the works, yes? XD
person Rina
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I agree with you that Warren is THE hottest character in Sky High and I'm happy to have found this charming story. Warren and Will are so adorable together. When you were describing how Warren looked when he came to pick up Will for Homecoming, I just had a huge smile on my face imagining it. I really loved how you used their superpowers before and during the sex scene, especially the image of Warren lighting the candles with little balls of flicked fire. Very cool. Thank you for writing this. Would love to see more.
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah... Must you insist on everything you write being so incredibly hot that I am left reduced to a puddle? I barely have the strength to type this! And, DAMN YOU, I think you have me addicted to yet ANOTHER fandom. Like I needed more pairings to obsess over! But still. Very very very good, as always. Keep up the good work!
person Sean
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was great... I liked how you included an actual plot instead of just randomly putting together a sex scene. Mmm... Romantic and hot ^_^
person Luffy
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEE! I usually HATE yaoi, but I'm makin' an exception for this. This is the FIRST gay piece I've ever been into. This is hott! I love Magenta! She's so cute! And I always thought of will as a bit of a masochist, loving the domination. Very hott!
person Blacklilnitecat
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This is such a HOT story!!! *drools I've been searching for a Will/Warren story and I'm soo happy I found yours!! I hope you'll write more!!
person Chrysler
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and so very adorable. You should write more Warren/Will fics, i love it!
person Artemis
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! is their going to be a second chapter? like an Mpreg? A posible(SP?) set up, from Zach? maybe not, but that would be hot. Great story, i loved it.
person Morrigan
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Is that what you want?” Warren hissed back, his hands now tracing patterns in the sweat gathering on Will’s stomach. “Do you want me to control you? To use you, bend you, take you? Don’t want to be the strong guy anymore?”

God, that was hot, hot, hot, hot, hot! I love kinky undertones (and overtones). All in all, I was pretty impressed, although I did think that Warren was a little overly affectionate (he doesn't seem like the PDA sort) and I didn't know why Will, an American teenager, was using British slang (bloody), but the sex scene was smoking! Bravo!