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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for anakin to kick his ass. (palpatin's)
UPDATE SOON!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has a lot of promise. But I suggest to proof read and do some grammer check before you post your chapters. Also, some "***" would be good for scene breaks.
Either that or get a beta! But this sounds very intresting! So please continue!
Either that or get a beta! But this sounds very intresting! So please continue!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll able to come back soon I really want to know how this story goes!!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Could you make the chapters longer? Or elaberate a bit more on stuff. This does sound pretty interesting please continue.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!! Kinda short, but good none the less I can't wait for the update and I'm so glad Anakin will not turn!!!