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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, though kinda short.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I like it.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd meantion that it looks like someone stole your writing. The following story is written practicly word for word just changing Ben to Sue instead. The writing's so bad it sounds like the person's made Sue a transexual. -_-"
http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090729
Your story, however, was well written and I really enjoyed it.
http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090729
Your story, however, was well written and I really enjoyed it.
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved this lol i am a sadistic ^_^ lol there should be kinda sequal after shck thing were ben keeps his promise to get his hot ass again mwuahaha
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... That was different. More than two words, yes? I'm not sure if I liked it... Or if I was... What's the word I'm looking for? Didn't quite like it. Hm... The latter but it's not that it wasn't good or anything! It's just that the Thing seems a bit more sweeter to me. If they made a plushie Thing I'd buy him extra large just so I could cuddle properly. The Thing is my favorite Fantastic. *sigh* But the writing wasn't half bad and if you're into that sort of thing then it was awesome too. Well... I gave you about... Ninety Nine words. Cool... More than two... Anyway, great job and I can't say that I didn't hate it... Just wasn't my sort of thing thought I did read to the end... Hmm... I have no idea what to say about that but yeah. Well... I hope you write some more stuff later on or whatever! Until then have a Fan-tas-tic Day!!!
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was intense. The sick part is I'm into that stuff..I wouldn't want it to happen to me, of course, but I love reading about it. That must've hurt beyond belief. The really sick part is I wish it was a lot more detailed. And I was wondering about this, wouldn't Thing's dick already be permanently hard? I don't know, just a thought. My friend is obssessed with Chris Evans beyond belief, so this'll tear *her* apart. I'll email her the addy rite now. (teehee I"m so weird)
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i found this one actually pretty good...*never liked johnny anyways... cocky lil guy* liked things revenge
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That rocked. Great job. You wanted a review, here it is. And you so right, there needs to be a little domination. Lol.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it ^^
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor johnny!!! Kill Thing!! i really think u should continue this story, please!! i very much enjoyed it.