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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really very much so enjoyed this story , well done, lookng forward to part 2, I'm off to read it now!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story ^^ I really love it!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was the first fic I've ever read that had to do with Ardeth and Rick. I've gotta tell you, I normally steer clear from slash of any kind. I liked the basic plot involving Evy being taken over by Evil Nefertiri. The slash bothered me a slight bit, but you write very well. I love how you write all the descriptions!
~ Estora ~
~ Estora ~
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I just started to read the sequlle [sp?] that you worte and I have already sniffle at it. You should really think about doin a Rick/Ab... I can't spell his name. But you should do a Mpreg of them. It would be awsome ^_^~
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful beyond works. Well done and I’m sad it’s over. I truly hope you write more.
Munnin
Munnin
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sniffles and hugs darkangel* That was so sweet! A lovely finish, though I wouldn't object to a sequel of course. Perhaps you could focus more on Alex, Jonathan and Ardeth's tribes' reaction to their relationship. Very cute. Well done.
~Loki
~Loki
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wohooooooo! The god of slash heard me!!! I am so greatful for the happy Rick\Ardeth ending *smiles* ^_^
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the ending to your story cor i just plain love your story please put up the sequel soon till then i'll be waiting
your ever faithful reader
shadowraven
your ever faithful reader
shadowraven
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
p.s. sorry i haven't reveiwd before computer wouldn't put it through but i got that fixed okies bye
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally had time to get caught up with this story. You've done a good job developing it and keeping it intense, while not rushing Rick and Ardeth into a full-out relationship. Rick has got a lot of emotional stuff to deal with, it's not something he should get over in a day no matter how much he wants Ardeth. And thanks for giving Nefertiri's POV throughout, it makes it all more poignant and real. Keep up the good job!