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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need more. Soo good..
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rick checking Ardeth out; nice.. Liked the describtion. Also the part where he admits that though he's stupid he doesn't consider people who try to kill him as potential bed partners. The part about his dream was a nice touch (maybe prophetic?). What will Rick see in the mirror? And then there's Alex who can't keep his hands to himself.
I kind of admire Jonathan 'cause he always tries to look on the bright side and lighten the mood. They need that.
I kind of admire Jonathan 'cause he always tries to look on the bright side and lighten the mood. They need that.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jepp, me again. Doing good, but I'd like to see more of Jonathan and Alex. They're sort of the comic relief but can also be heroic when needed.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good. More please!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally a Rick/Ardeth story. Nice solution with Evy. More chapters!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally a Rick/Ardeth story. Nice solution with Evy. More chapters!