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for The Auction

by DMS88

person mary
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So sweet nd funny!
person RyuaAlba
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was just delightful! I've gotten so into dark, kinky, violent sex lately that I forgot how awesome sweet loving, friendly relationships could be. I love how you write these two. It just is so awesome. And damn it, now it's really late again and Ihave to work in the morning... Lovely story, just lovely.
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story! I loved it!
person iy7it
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person kayladie
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And you say you can't write smut! *shakes head in disbelief* This was GREAT! I loved the whole thing, from Mara teasing Luke, to their mutual embarrassment when they realized he was turned on by the thought of it. And the trip to the amusement park was fantastic. I especially liked Mara screaming on the freefall ride, hehehe!

And the smut! WOW! I loved the part with Mara dropping her Force barriers and the two of them really connecting. I don't think I've ever read a better representation of that part of their sexual relationship. Great job!

You know you want to write more of this....
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool nicely done
person platypusred
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
person AgiVega
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant fic - just brilliant. It's humorous, it's sexy, AND it has a plot! Can't wait to read more of it, so please, update soon!
person wes
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i want to know what happens next post soon