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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOA, I'm digging in! Your smut is surely delicious. Lucky, I discovered such a good story.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story but i think the transitions between them fighting or battle scenes and stuff (especially in showdown) to them having sex need a lot of work. it's just not logic. I also think that there's so much smut in here that it makes it all less special. and the parts where you've caps locked Bally in johns orgasm induced fits are too much. caps lock in a sex scene ruins it.
just a bit of adviese n i hope you don't take it the wrong way.
just a bit of adviese n i hope you don't take it the wrong way.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Can't stop reading, over and over again, this is so well written." - OperaKing101
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it ^^~ You should do more mpregs, Maybe on of John/Cass? anyway good stuff ^_^~
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job at finishing the story. I enjoyed it a lot and I definetly think a sequel is a good idea.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looooved it. <3 Great ending. We should be thanking YOU actually, for taking the time to finish it. It's hard to do considering you're in school and stuff. Great story. Hope you write a sequel. =)
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applause* Wonderful dear just wonderful! It was great being there fromt the start of your story and all the way to the end! I really enjoyed the lot! Pretty sad that it had to end but all good things must come to an end as they say. Thank you for providing such a wonderful sotry and I will try to see your other stories. This was just magnificent and extremely adorable. Wonderful job luv. Keep your head up high and your talent strong. Hope to here from you once more.
Your reviewer,
loner654
Your reviewer,
loner654
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is everything all right, sweetie? I hope it is haven't heard from you in a while now.