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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooooh! need ing updates!!!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry please...
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for replies! lol. I didn't mean to rush you or anything, especially if you're in school and you have other priorties before updating awesome bally/john slash. But thanks for letting me know. I get impatient a little too fast. Forgive me for wanting to read stories like 24/7. i blame this fandom. =) Good chapter *especially the sex* cough. <3 Cant wait for more.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O wow i see them not ever fighting again. The first part was really sweet but then the child became kind of freaky lol jk the baby just does not want the parents to fight. But wow amazing power if the baby can do that inside of bally. I wonder how this baby will really look you know? I think it would look rather interesting since its going to be half demon and half human. But wonderful job on the chapter luv. I luved it! Damn those pregnant urgencies, they make the pregant one all horny all the time. All John wants is sleep , I know how that feels. LOL So anyway, good job on it and can't wait for your next update. And here is some mil for those muffins ^_^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading this fic without reviewing & i'm hoping my review and the other reviews will encourage you to write some more, or at least try to update soon. this is a great fanfic, probably one of the top five bestest B/C fics i've ever read. you've got the characters personalities down pat and the dialogue seems like it's pulled straight from the movie. <333 great job. hope you update soooooon.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love the part about the baby - "Don't fight.". I can just hear it. That was a vulnerable and cute moment. Think we can safely say he's inherited his parents' powers and are gonna be powerful.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet amother wonderful chapter. I think thats Luci's plans are helping Johnny and Bally to get more in touch with each other you know? And oh boy you had me on the edge of my seat when Chaz got shot. I forgot for a moment there he was an angel and I surely thought he died but then he fixes himself lol And poor Angela had to learn the hard way. I think I found it really sweet how much love and affection the two lovers were showing to each other. This scene was really suspenseful and romantic. And that is one smart baby they have in their hands, if it could send danger from inside the womb (do guys have wombs? o.o lol). I really enjoyed that chapter just like the other ones, but I still can't get over the whole chocolate steak ordeal lol I am loving this even more and you are able to make any lil excuse just for the two to have sex. LOL they are really sweet! Great job luv! Oh and for the last review, no prob, you earned it luv. Have some chocolate muffins and steak lol
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Every chapter better than the previous. You're great for updating so fast. Continue soon!!!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, luv! Sorry for not reviewing last chapter. I was away at an emergency meeting with my job so it was a suddent thing. But great job on these last two chapters. Angela reall needs to find herself a new hobby that does not emvolve Johnny lol really is more like "He is mine and mine only" OI she really needs to shut up about that lol anyway i could not stop laughing over the last chapter when John had cum on his face. I could just imgaine that right now lol. Bally is so bad and chaz is not helping lol but i find it bloody hilarious. Anyway, that was some major Angela bashing lol. Good smut scene! I like it can't wait for your next update. Oh, and angela? don;t you dare hurt Bally! *smiles evilly* ^_^
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another day, another chapter. Can't wait to see what happens so update, ok?