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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! BALLY!!!! LUCIFER MUST DIEEEE IF HE HURTS JOHN'S BALLY AND BABY!!! They will survive and John will kick some ass!!! BWAHAHAHA!!! Please let Bally be ok!!! Go john, stop denying ur feelings and go to your convient fuck LOLLOL wow the sounds pretty strange to say! lol But good job on this chap u left me in suspense can't wait 4 ur next update. -_^ *gives you a baby girrafe*
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooo! *Clutches Bally to her in order to protect him* Bring him back!
Don't worry about the time jumps hun, I'm grateful for them. We've got at least 4 months to go (or will the baby come early because it's um....special?) and if you wrote about every single day...I'd probably kill you. But you managed the jump very well, so don't fret.
Now, go rescue Balthazar and the baby!
~Loki
Don't worry about the time jumps hun, I'm grateful for them. We've got at least 4 months to go (or will the baby come early because it's um....special?) and if you wrote about every single day...I'd probably kill you. But you managed the jump very well, so don't fret.
Now, go rescue Balthazar and the baby!
~Loki
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Continue as soon as you can!!!
kisses,
mirage
kisses,
mirage
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Die Angela die! *Sets voodoo doll of Angela on fire* Muhahahahahaha! Oooooooh, I can't believe the cops caught them ^_^ and trust Bally to find it amusing. *Looks hopeful* Mind you, if John's paying the fine, then the LEAST Balthazar could do is make it up to him. John's musings about punishment are also verrrrrrrrry interesting.
*Bursts into tears and clings onto darkangel* I've got to go away for a week with no internet access! You'll have to write lots and lots so I can give you multiple reviews when I get back! See ya soon,
~Loki - on vacation
*Bursts into tears and clings onto darkangel* I've got to go away for a week with no internet access! You'll have to write lots and lots so I can give you multiple reviews when I get back! See ya soon,
~Loki - on vacation
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLOL Well at least it wasn't a poor innocent sales woman but she proably would have drooled over the scene. And it would have been cheaper for John. And Angela needs to leave the couple alone. And Bally is becoming more humorous by the chapter. Good work! *gives you an apple pie and a baby gorilla that has a squirrel spirit inside it* Enjoy! ^_^ (....cough cough *more* cough*smutt*...cough choke wheeze)
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sad puppy eyes: PLease update soon. I'll give you a nice hug if you do
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Wails* Bally was crying?! Cos he thought John wouldn't love him when he was fat? *Grins* Oh, that is an absolute stroke of pure genius, even if it did nearly make me burst into tears. Oooooooooooooh, and don't tell me some irate sales woman is going to walk in on them fucking (which was exceedingly hot by the way, as always). Gods above I love this story. *Gives glomps and cookies*
~Loki
~Loki
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Update as soon as possible!!!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ excellent job!!! another smut scene and this time in a public place!!! Johnny is coming into the light! (hehehe...oh yeah he's coming all right) lol. Wow this one was really cute and John is going to be tortured by Bally.LOL I can't wait for your new chapter. And i wonder who cuaght them it would be hilarious of it was one the sales ladies lololol won't she have a story to tell when she gets home!! And i love the whole story! and yes john is dense sometimes! but he has bally to watch for him in dense time lol
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooh, Bally just doesn't know when to stop does he? But after the absolute cuteness of the morning semi-sex, I reckon I could forgive you just about anything *winks*...and John's little belly brush was just beyond words *Glomps darkangel*
Love it!
~Loki
Love it!
~Loki