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XD YAY! Finally update! *drools* This was wicked awesome smut! And fluffy! XD Hahaha john soon will subcome to the power known as the subconcious! And i am loving the alter egos of john. poor bally. suffers the wrath of mixed communication lol. Wow thanks a lot for the smut it was awesome. I'm really hoping for more in the future. JonBa (the couple's baby) lol will live!!! live i tell you live!!!!!!!! and sulfur seems to be a famous smell now LOL Good job!! *two thumbs up*

Hiya!

Very cool writing. I found a link to a really good Harry Potter Mpreg story, it describes the birth of the child very detailed.
If you're interested: http://mpreg.brain-insane.com/harpot/pricepride.html

Bye, Tierchen

Oh thank goddess! *Beams happily* I knew you wouldn't hurt the baby hunni, the idea of a mini-BallyJohn is just too cute! And totally hot, as secondson mentioned. Mmmmm....John and Bally in bed together. Is Balthazar going to have a guilt attack for wrecking John's place and decide to make it up to him? One can only hope!

~Loki

You better! No killing on John and Bally's baby while i'm around. LOL Good job and finally John is starting to listen to Chad. They should have another smut scene together *drools on keyboard then gets electracuted* OI! @_@;; .....need more smut....bally and johnyyyyy.......good work on story....pretty daisies...X_X;;

DON'T YOU DARE! Let Chas come in and whack him round the head! Let John have a momentary change of heart! Let Balthazar cotton on and kick the hell outta him! Let THE BLOODY HOLY WATER NOT WORK! I WANT THAT BABY! *Bursts into tears and wraps arms around pregnant Bally* Let God pay for the blooming child if it's so important. *Big eyes* You're not going to kill it, are you hun? Because whilst I have no objection to women choosing to have abortions...how can you kill a baby Bally-John? And it's gonna be a girl, right? Just to rub it in *smirk*
Other than that, brilliant as usual!

~Loki

First of all, the scene on the bathroom floor? Too hot for words. Bal on all fours? Yum.

Second - someone come and hit this boy in the head please. Any child born between them would grow up to be immensely hot, and he's a bastard for trying to deprive us of that. XD And wouldn't it be more damaging to inject holy water directly into the womb itself? *shrug* Just a thought.

No problem buddy! You right very good stories! And oooo your new chapter was just as sweet. It is just so wonderful how Bally could easily make John forget about his mission lololol. Just please I'm begging you don't let the kid die. It would be so cute if they both have a child together. LOL But wonderful smut scene, very typical way to make one forget. *snicker* Bring me more Bally/Johnny Boy LOL And poor Chad still ignored even though he is now a supreme spirit LOL. Very good job! Please continue! :)

This story is so freaking cool. You got me so hooked on it like a mosquito towards light. I would never have ex[ected anything like this would ever happen and i am a huge yaoi (slash) fan. Good job! You portrayed the characters really well! I can't wait for your update!

Woohoo, an update! I love you hunni. Ooooh, John's reaction doesn't look good. Poor Balthazar, he's gonna be a single mother...father...whatever. Absolutely loving it so far,

~Loki

This is really really good! Especially if it's your first Constantine one. *Giggles* Geez, Lucifer sure doesn't pull his punches. Tell me there's gonna be another smut scene *puppy eyes* pwease? Anyway, can't wait for another update!

~Loki