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by darkangel985

person Marie
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Oh that was awsome! Dear...God? You have to write a part two. That was sooooo hot. It's just how I imagioned the ending in my head after I watched that scene for the ten thousandth time. lol And you spelled cum right! I will eternaly love you for that!
person Morningstar
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! So good! *gahh* (cue Homer Simpson-drooling). Second-in-command of Hell, not exactly a job you find in the wanted-adds. Satan really is a small kid with Tourettes..
So good. Domination, possessiveness, slight spanking, *sigh* I'd really like to see how this works out. Maybe some of John doing his new job, metting Papa Midnite, some angel, his parents (they let him over to electroshock-"therapy", I'd carry a grudge), Mammon's reaction, working with other demons; including Belthazor, Gabriel (who's human now), dissing God.. There's so much you could do with this.