rate_review Reviews

oh were to start? my god that was perfect! *sigh* it wasn't like alot of the stories on this, it was beautifully written and had a great exciting plot...oh and Jack was perfect, you got him down pat, sometimes people are really bad at writting him but not you, yer good at it! And aye he was sorta a suportting role in a way, but then again I could really place the main character...it was either Angle or Will....or even Harry ahaha. But omg! I love this story!.....it could have been a movie hehehe oh! *sigh* it was perfect......

Very enjoyable! Nice to read a story all in one part. Interesting characters, good dialogue (especially Jack), and hot without being sleazy. Good job!

What a great adventure! Not enough Jack in it for my tastes, but the tale sucked me in so that I hardly had time to notice. Well done!

I am only halfway through this absolutely gripping story and am so IMPRESSED with your writing ability. This is truly a wonderful tale! Your story is very rich and full of everything a POTC tale should have and yet it has MORE. I can't wait to finish reading it, yet, I will also be saddened because...I don't think there will be more????? I love these two (Angel and Will) together...I'm off to savor more of your excellet story!!!

Tinewen

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Wow....your story was fantastic! All of your characters had such strength and depth, I could envision them so clearly. That Robert was her brother was a nice twist, really a sick man to have done what he did to her, and very sad. I was not surprised though that Ashe had Will's child, I was HOPING she would, to me it just added to the story. I was happy too that Harry could accept it, if he had been younger and discovered it, the story might have been different.

You sure you don't write for a living? If you don't you really should consider it. It's been a long time since I've read a really good Will Turner story, this is possibly the best one yet!!

Tinewen