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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very well written. It's long and has lots of detail.
There were only a few grammatical errors.
Overall, very well done!
There were only a few grammatical errors.
Overall, very well done!
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wants a cigarette and doesn't even smoke*
If their first time was this hot, just think of how good it'll be once they're used to each other. GUH.
If their first time was this hot, just think of how good it'll be once they're used to each other. GUH.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, wow! this is so good, you've drawn an amazing relationship between the two guys. I really think it's close to fantastic!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is the third or fourth time i've read this and it's still just as amazing
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was one of the hottest stories i've ever read. this is the third time i've read it because it's so good and i wanted to tell you it's an extremely
wonderful work of art, perfectly blending true love and eroticism.
wonderful work of art, perfectly blending true love and eroticism.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven't even watched the movie. I loved this little story between them. So flirty, and the body language. I really liked it when he said, "your first time wasn't with a girl." Plus, when Johnny cheeks flushed. Now that was really sweet. I was really hoping that there would be more chapter to this story. I really would like to read them. I loved it. Thank you.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Really Hot! And I must say that I did not think of them as a pair. But I do now!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this fic! It's so sweet, yet you did such a great job with the sex! :D You should really write another one, and if you have a Vic/Reed fic, pleeeease post it! *swings pendulum* You are getting sleepy, you will post it... Anyways, great job on this one!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story.I always wondered how it would be for Ben to have sex.And with Johnny-that's just the icing on the cake.Loved it!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE US M #1!!! x3 Bwahahaha. You did a good job catching most of our errors. I'm looking at my typos, like, "JEEZ MAN I SUCK LIEK WOAH". x3 Yay for prose style RP and it's easy-to-convert-ness.
XD Whadditiz, yo.
Johnny says, "Hey Benny next time don't scream down my throat!"
XD i had totally forgotten how much lube they used. xD like. Tons. xD Which is probably a good thing. We should so post Vik and Reed. xD Because Viktor is not so much with the lube. xD Less sticky, I guess.
:B ZOMG THIS IS TEH BESTZOR FICZOR EVORZORZOR
Or something. x3
XD Whadditiz, yo.
Johnny says, "Hey Benny next time don't scream down my throat!"
XD i had totally forgotten how much lube they used. xD like. Tons. xD Which is probably a good thing. We should so post Vik and Reed. xD Because Viktor is not so much with the lube. xD Less sticky, I guess.
:B ZOMG THIS IS TEH BESTZOR FICZOR EVORZORZOR
Or something. x3