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for Watching again

by darkangel985

person Morningstar
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely ending! Sorry, I haven't reviewed more on this story, but I've either not had the time or just didn't feel up to it (if you don't feel up to it the reviews just turn out bad). Anyway, great story, and I'm glad you finished it but also a little sad that it's done. But hey, that's what sequels are for, right?
I'd like to see how they evolve from here, especially Joel. Will they continue the killing together? Playing the game; them against the law?
There's an idea for a sequel; "The Wathcer goes Canada/Mexico/Europe/Asia/Oseania/".
person Alice
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fine, I'll be all patient and crap. But yeah, I like where the story is heading, and I wonder just how far Joel will go. *coughs* And I'm curious to see how far they'll go. I mean, uh, yeah.
person Alice
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was... wow. Um, yeah. Can we have more please? Ohhh man that was good.
person Alice
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very creepy. You've managed to give the story a twisted point of view, one in which I can understand Joel's feelings and David's actions. You've actually made it romantic. creepy, but romantic. Very good.
person Morningstar
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I were you I'd be more disturbed that you can put yourself in LUCIFER'S mind, but if a serial-killer's mind disturbs you more..
person Zenthya
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy someone wrote a story about The Watcher! I love your story and I hope to see more of it soon. Good job :)
person TwistedFairytale
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story just gets better and better. :-) You are a good writer, keep going!!!!!!!!!
person siw-wa
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE THRILL!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Risa
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good. I read most of your stories and must say I like them all but I definetly love this one the most. Please update soon!
person siw-wa
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWOON!! A major swoon action. Love it really? Will you update again soon? Please?