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for Time Retreating

by Ladykohl

person mary
schedule March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great story. Your approach was so unique. Thank you for writing it.
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am new to this board and I have to say that your writing is wonderful! I just spend the last few days reading all three of your Star Wars stories and all a can say to complain is I wish they were completed. I guess it is a worry that you have a total of three stories posted and not one of them is completed and it looks like it's been a while since you updated and your e-mail is blocked. I hope I didn't waste the last few days reading your stories that may never be finished. Your stories are addictive...Please Update Soon...Heather
person FASomers
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful........please, please continue it!
person coolbeans
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please update this soon. I really can't wait anymore to see how this turns out.
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update?? =(
person doloris
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE HURRY UP WITH THE STORY!!!
person Julie
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In some ways, I find this story more disturbing than "Forget Me Not." You portray Anakin as so...I don't know if "evil" is the right word. He's definitely unstable in this universe. I don't like him here and it's unusual for me not to like Anakin, since he is one of my favorite characters. And poor Padmé finds herself unable to escape him, though, in many ways, I don't think she wants to. She loves him but at the same time she wishes she didn't.
I hope you will continue this fascinating story soon.
person Linwe_Amari
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update?
person Penny
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is incredible. It was emotionally gut wrenching. I like the little bit darker side of Anakin. Anyway, please update soon. Wonderful job again.
person Linwe_Amari
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really great! Update soon! I'll be chacking beck!

~Linwe-Amari