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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, I can't spell for nothing! *checking*
sorry!
sorry!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is superb! Love it love it. It's so clear! The storyline is fantastic too. A little confusing in the beginning but i think you were going for that lol Just had to say you're a terrific writer!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this keep it coming!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great! Very erotic and too long coming! Don't wait too long for your next chapter.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! More.. More!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! i read your note in the beginning and thought "eh, I've seen the darker Anakin. show me something new." but i read the first chapter and was hooked!!! i love this story! great work !
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that you revised it. I thought the ending needed a little explanation. Can not wait for the next chapters! Keep going. (P. S. I noticed that you changed her from wearing pants to a skirt nice touch)
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good ..i brings a diffrent side to anakin/padme's relationship..what wzs between the lines of the marriage and how they got together..KEEP workin on it..Love it!!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story has remained consistent and very well written. This is definately one of my favorites on this site.
I love how your Anakin can be so cruel but still so loving. You can see that he only does what he does because he loves Padme so much. Wonderful work as always. Post soon!
I love how your Anakin can be so cruel but still so loving. You can see that he only does what he does because he loves Padme so much. Wonderful work as always. Post soon!
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story!