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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And to think you were once going to give up on this story! I'm sooo glad you didn't.
However, you're doing something seems to happen alot in this fandom... Why does Padme have to be so resigned to her fate? Why must she marry him? I'd love to see someone write something where she dosen't, just to see what could happen. My ideological differences aside, that was a great chapter, and I look forward to more.
However, you're doing something seems to happen alot in this fandom... Why does Padme have to be so resigned to her fate? Why must she marry him? I'd love to see someone write something where she dosen't, just to see what could happen. My ideological differences aside, that was a great chapter, and I look forward to more.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to chime in here on the previous reviewers question as to 'why must Padme marry Anakin?'. Putting aside the debate on 'why', the author is merely following canon, the history of this couple is already written. The author is merely flashing back to what has already happened, albeit by giving us more indepth, and therefore naughty, glimpses than Lucas did (praise be!). So I can't see that she is falling into any "trap" by following the way the story played out. Padme *did* marry Anakin - that's just what happene :-).
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At last, an update. Very well written. You captured the obsessive side of Anakin well.
Don't take too long for the next installation.
Don't take too long for the next installation.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please?
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting how you switch back and forth between the chapters between the present time and the memories. It's very original. I love your Anakin, by the way. Where can I get one? *sigh* Wonderful chapter, as usual.
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigoddddd, you have to update soon!!!!!It's soooo great, especially when Anakin told her she was his angel(sniff) Noone tells me that kinda stuff(bawling) Anyway I'm in love with your fic so please update soon!!!!!!!
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the conversation between Padme and Anakin in this chapter. The "I dont want to be that person" line and "I miss you" were veyr effective. Looking forward to the next chapter- by all means make it as dark as you can!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked last chapter.... interesting and full of surprises ^^
keep up the good work
keep up the good work
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is no 'had to be' only 'post more chapters at one time'!! LOL Interesting. I've always been a sucker for reincarnation stories. It's hard to feedback set up chapters, specifically SHORT set up chapters, but I will say you handled it well. There are a few typos, have you thought about getting a beta? These are the kinds of typos that Spell Check doesn't catch, like 'week' instead of 'weak', etc. Anyway, looking forward to the hopefully much longer chapters to come *hint hint* :-D
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. It's a very original idea you have here. Hopefully you'll keep it that way and wont fall in to the same routine as a lot of other padme/anakin writers have. Keep up the good work!