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for New breed of evil

by darkangel985

schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was fucking awesome!!!!!
the fact that you wrote the power plays between John and Lu so well and managed to work Lu's insecurities into there about not having John think that he belonged to anyone else. I did feel a little sorry for Chas but at least he will get regular fucks from Balthazar lol
The sex scenes were very well written and you kept the characters true to form.
all in all very sexy and well worth the read! :)
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok -hatte keine geduld mehr und hab mich jetzt auch auf aff angemeldet, nur um deine story weiterlesen zu können! dass ist doch mal ein kompliment, oder? *grins*
Hoffe, du schreibst noch lange weiter mit john/lu, das pairing gibt's einfach so selten. obwohl mir die story auf englisch sogar noch besser gefällt - keine ahnung, wieso.

Grüßli Raven0801
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story- the hot sex, the storyline- and how well it brings out athmospheres: one can really FEEL how powerful John is when he walks through the bar, angels and demons envying him. Love that.
person Anon
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so freaking HOT.
person Tyrisha
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm only halfway through and i was addicted a long long time ago. poor john, such is the life of the consort of hell's lord and master. not that, even with thoughts brought up by it, that he'd let that reduce him to begging. well done
person claire
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should make another sequel ^^
person jessica
schedule March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY KEEP IT UP
person claire
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see how things work out ^^
person clair3
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JUst gotta luv John & Lucifer
person Yersi Fanel
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evilness! Yep, Evil!John is another thing! really nice, I love it!