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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll say that this is really good!!!!! Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chap!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Azrael! I've actually been thinking about him when I read your story, but didn't think to ask you to write him in. Never thought about the resemblance in suits, though. I loved how you worked him in.
And then there was Mammon. Didn't take it too well, no siree bob. Lucifer should just off him and start over. *hint hint* Not so sure John would agree though. John would have been able to hold his own, I think, if he hadn't been caught off guard. And more possessive-protective-Lucifer! Yay!!
John should get more physical-power though, or so much mental that he can stop attackers through their minds.
Haven't seen Papa Midnite in a while. I like him. He's got a soft spot for John, you can't deny that. Though he'll be the last to admit it, I'm sure.
And then there was Mammon. Didn't take it too well, no siree bob. Lucifer should just off him and start over. *hint hint* Not so sure John would agree though. John would have been able to hold his own, I think, if he hadn't been caught off guard. And more possessive-protective-Lucifer! Yay!!
John should get more physical-power though, or so much mental that he can stop attackers through their minds.
Haven't seen Papa Midnite in a while. I like him. He's got a soft spot for John, you can't deny that. Though he'll be the last to admit it, I'm sure.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arrrrgggg!!!! You can not leave it there. Been ages since got this into a fic. Please please write more.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the new chapter :) I like the little Dogma influence that movie is awesome! I liked the last chapter too but then it got deleted and so did the review I left in that chapter u said that Lucifer fought over he treated humans but wasn't lucifer cast oout of heaven before the creation oof mankind?
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! We get to see Mammon at last! I liked how John was getting so excited with the power that he was left. Why did Lu come back all of sudden?
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
But it's a gooood plot bunny! Come on.. Pleeeeaaaase? Pretty please? *bambie-eyes*
Good description of the tattoos. I would have expected them to be chackles, the kind that can't be taken off, particularly since you described that he had them around his neck, wrists, ankles etc.
Good description of the tattoos. I would have expected them to be chackles, the kind that can't be taken off, particularly since you described that he had them around his neck, wrists, ankles etc.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what happened to chapter 16?! Is there something wrong with my computer or did you remove it?!?
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I like. But u got me curious 2 know about the tatoos now DAMN U!!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Punching Lucifer.. doesn't normally insure a long lifespan. Constantine puts himself in place. He may belong to Lucifer, but he isn't gonna get treated in any way other then respectfully.
Idea: I read that John's mother is going to heaven, so John is getting his revenge while he can. But I got an idea from your John/Balthazar-story: Lucifer tries to have John condemned by tricking him into killing someone (his chield, the people who attacked Balthazar). Why can't John do the same? Convince her that it's someone else's fault that she sees John, and that he will go away if she kills them? Like.. her grandchild or daughter in-law or something.
Also, where's Mammon? Haven't seen him or what happened. Does he know what John isor has his father "neglected" to tell him?
Are they gonna get back the souls they lost in the poker-game?
Also would like to see more of Midnite and his club. I keep picturing him as the godfather of John and Lu's child. Don't know why, just seems fitting. Who would be stupid enough to attempt to harm the child of Lucifer and his consort, John Constantine, and the godson of Papa Midnite?
Great story, keep it up.
Idea: I read that John's mother is going to heaven, so John is getting his revenge while he can. But I got an idea from your John/Balthazar-story: Lucifer tries to have John condemned by tricking him into killing someone (his chield, the people who attacked Balthazar). Why can't John do the same? Convince her that it's someone else's fault that she sees John, and that he will go away if she kills them? Like.. her grandchild or daughter in-law or something.
Also, where's Mammon? Haven't seen him or what happened. Does he know what John isor has his father "neglected" to tell him?
Are they gonna get back the souls they lost in the poker-game?
Also would like to see more of Midnite and his club. I keep picturing him as the godfather of John and Lu's child. Don't know why, just seems fitting. Who would be stupid enough to attempt to harm the child of Lucifer and his consort, John Constantine, and the godson of Papa Midnite?
Great story, keep it up.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now, that's what I call making up. I'm glad you had Constantine get in some hits against ole Lu. I'm not sure if I had reviewed the previous chapter or not. Anywho, Great chapters!