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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya
Love ya
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that you're able to adjust the enviorment as events take place (demon-behavior etc). Oh, and nice going with occult-killer. Watching them from the demon-point of you, they look kinda pathetic/weird/wannabes.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so basically I'm happy as long as u keep the lu/john action up and keep updating reguarly so keep updating or i'll be sad :(
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is kinda funny..
I check this fic almost every day for updates, but there aren't any, and when I finally reach that point where I know there won't be a new chapter but I check anyway, then suddenly, it's just there.
A brand new wonderful chappie! ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
^.~
Ooh, and btw, if you didn't get it, I really like your story/this chappie! ^^
Darkish(is that a word..? =P) hugs,
~Wolflady
I check this fic almost every day for updates, but there aren't any, and when I finally reach that point where I know there won't be a new chapter but I check anyway, then suddenly, it's just there.
A brand new wonderful chappie! ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
^.~
Ooh, and btw, if you didn't get it, I really like your story/this chappie! ^^
Darkish(is that a word..? =P) hugs,
~Wolflady
schedule
November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is kinda funny..
I check this fic almost every day for updates, but there aren't any, and when I finally reach that point where I know there won't be a new chapter but I check anyway, then suddenly, it's just there.
A brand new wonderful chappie! ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
^.~
Ooh, and btw, if you didn't get it, I really like your story/this chappie! ^^
Darkish(is that a word..? =P) hugs,
~Wolflady
I check this fic almost every day for updates, but there aren't any, and when I finally reach that point where I know there won't be a new chapter but I check anyway, then suddenly, it's just there.
A brand new wonderful chappie! ^^
More.
Soon.
Please.
^.~
Ooh, and btw, if you didn't get it, I really like your story/this chappie! ^^
Darkish(is that a word..? =P) hugs,
~Wolflady
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooops, sorry I double-posted the review..
It took soooo long for it to post, that I clicked the button again, and then suddenly there was two reviews..
Ah well, you got more reviews now.. =P
*giggles*
~Wolfie
It took soooo long for it to post, that I clicked the button again, and then suddenly there was two reviews..
Ah well, you got more reviews now.. =P
*giggles*
~Wolfie
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Sorry I didn't review immideatly you put the next chapter out, but I've been in Venice for the last week.
Despite the fact that he tortured him, Lu still kept strong affection and respect? for him ("his precious John"). He got tortured by the devil but still didn't break. How many people could boast that? Nice to see a bit of history in there; how he noticed John, while he was those two minutes in Hell, before he became THE John Constantine.
Still, John needs to set himself back in place, to show that he won't accept everything Lu does.
John has found himself a new mark, Angela has a freaking force of nature heading towards here. Can't wait to see what you (or more appropriatly John) do.
Hurricane John should be arriving by the next chapter?
Despite the fact that he tortured him, Lu still kept strong affection and respect? for him ("his precious John"). He got tortured by the devil but still didn't break. How many people could boast that? Nice to see a bit of history in there; how he noticed John, while he was those two minutes in Hell, before he became THE John Constantine.
Still, John needs to set himself back in place, to show that he won't accept everything Lu does.
John has found himself a new mark, Angela has a freaking force of nature heading towards here. Can't wait to see what you (or more appropriatly John) do.
Hurricane John should be arriving by the next chapter?
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe I really do love an evil John it so cool to have him as the evil plotting one. In the next chapter though could u please include a reference or something as to what is happening to Gabriel? Has she starved to death by now or is she getting on in the world?
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was disturbing, but not as bloody as some of the other fics I've read. I think you got John's thinking during the torture pretty IC too. Good job!!!
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter(yes, I still like it).. :P
'cuse how strange it may sound, there was something beautiful in it.. ^.~
More.
Soon.
Please.
Pleeeease...
^^
'cuse how strange it may sound, there was something beautiful in it.. ^.~
More.
Soon.
Please.
Pleeeease...
^^