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You have done well again. I was very pleased by this chapter because u were harsh on John but not 2 harsh on him. I was expecting u to be a lot meaner but u weren't so I'm happy.

I love the fact that you made God look like Santa Clause. That cracked me up. Also the whole betting o souls thing just was awesome. Great chapter.

Oooooooooooooooooooooooh this isn't looking good for Johnny boy. Still, I'm glad the story's going this way - Lu is the devil after all and it definitely makes it more realistic. The poker game idea was a touch of brilliance! *Giggles* I'm hoping for more run-ins with Michael some time in the future. And corrupt Chas! He's such a goody-two-shoes, you just know he's gotta have a couple of kinks he's been repressing all these years. Bestiality maybe? Or he just likes to be dominated? Though for angels Sodomy is a sin in itself no? Anyway, more!

~Loki

Loved the update!!! I thought that the idea of god playing poker over souls very cool but don't be to mean to poor John in the next chapter.

Ooh, shit! >_O
Poor little Johnny... >_>

You gotta update soon, please!
Pleeeease!!
^^

Hiya, me again.. :P

Suddenly remembered that I didn't say all the things I was going to tell you.. *blushes* ^_~

Soo, on with the (continued)review:
I think Johnny' should be let off more easily then Balthazar *winks*. After all he is Lu's consort/second in command..
Nice interaction with the angels (Michael) and God and the Devil playing poker 'bout human souls. *giggles*
Anyway, take Lucifer for instance, he used to be God's favourite before he became the Devil. He was said to be the most beautiful of all the angels, and then there was Gabriel who lost her/his mind, allied her-/himself with Lucifer's son, then tried to bring him over to the earth...
Does anyone else see a pattern here, or is it just me? I wonder how long it'll be till Michael falls from grace too....? O_o


Well, I think I've said all no.. ^^
If not, I'll just have to come back again, wont I...? :P

(Demonic.. :P) Kisses,
~Wolfie

Oh, that's not good, I guess he can't expect to get away from everything, even if he is the Consort. But I'd think he'd be let off more easily then Balthazar *hint hint*. Nice interaction with the angels (Michael). I guess being angel doesn't mean you'll act like a saint. Honestly, have to be restrained by God. (Guess you can't really be sure what gender they are, but by the looks they sent Lu and John they wouldn't need it.) Take Lucifer for instance, he used to be God's favourite before he became the Devil. He was said to be the most beautiful of all the angels, so beautiful that he was known as The Morningstar. Then there was Gabrielle who lost her mind, allied herself with Lucifer's son, then tried to bring him over to our plane. Does anyone else see a pattern here? How long till Michael falls from grace?
Sorry, I didn't review chapter 10. I barely had time to read it, it's my final year in high school and they're making us earn it. I'll try to add a review for chapter 10 later.

Hey just want to tell u that I love ur story so KEEP UPDATING REGUARLY or I will be sad and cry :( also I am curious as to what lucifer would have done to Mammon could u possibly work that in somewhere??

Oh that was a nice cliffie! God...Matthew's wife deserves the bastard...what kind of wife reacts in such a bitchy way and wondering how she can possibly continue living a life of luxury?? I love how you're slowly destroying their lives...it's the kind of torture I'd gladly pay to see on my worst enemies. Will you be punishing Matthew's entire family, including his son? That would be so awesome to see his entire world just decay an delapidate in front of him w/out any way to stop it. Great chapter and I especially like how John got Ballie to agree w/ him (even tho Ballie would have to agree anyways).

Poor Johnny, getting all his fun ruined.. *pouts* ^^
Sex scen soon, please...?

As long as you continue to update QUITE often.. :P *giggles*

More.
Soon.
Please.

*hands over a plate of cookies*
^.~