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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update!
Loved how you made John help Steve.
The discussion with Lucifer was definitly good. The source of all evil, lying on a bed with silk-sheets and doing his nails.. Clearly vanity isn't restricted to humans.
You were right, John is independent and just being himself here. He really has no limits; how many people would take such liberties with the Devil. Lucifer would never let himself be mounted like that, but I suspect John's gotten closer than anyone before him (or he's the only one that's lived to tell the tale).
Loved how you made John help Steve.
The discussion with Lucifer was definitly good. The source of all evil, lying on a bed with silk-sheets and doing his nails.. Clearly vanity isn't restricted to humans.
You were right, John is independent and just being himself here. He really has no limits; how many people would take such liberties with the Devil. Lucifer would never let himself be mounted like that, but I suspect John's gotten closer than anyone before him (or he's the only one that's lived to tell the tale).
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niii-iice... ^.~
I Love your John/Lu scenes, they seem soo..so..real. Kinda. ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^_^
I Love your John/Lu scenes, they seem soo..so..real. Kinda. ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^_^
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you characterize Lucifer...it's like an arrogance that fits him like a glove. The way John fights and demands for dominance and Lu's powers as the devil, I start to wonder sometimes who has who around their little pinky.... It seems so sinful to like this pairing...maybe because you write it so well.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey!!! Awesome chapter. I like that John is gonna try to get Chas to fall. Does that mean Chas will become human? Also, if John is actually causing mayhem, does that sorta tip the balances and stuff? And I liked the name of the corporation.."luce inc" hahahaa. So I was wondering since John took Mammon's position in hell, where's Mammon? What happened to his powers? I also really like how John's character is so very human and because of that, he makes such a good 2nd in command in hell and causing mischief. I didn't get to review for the beginning chapters of this story, but I had wanted to mention how much I love the scenes where you have Lu being possessive of John. The image that sticks in my mind the most is when Lu holds John in the garden in Hell and Lu is telling him how all beauty in Hell is reserved for Lu and Lu alone, while holding John tighter around the waiste. That was just a phenomenally kickass scene of twisted romantic indulgences and an anime "Wah!!!" moment.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooooow.. :)
Nice chapter(as always). ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^.~
Nice chapter(as always). ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^.~
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you worked in my suggestion for John's 'childhood' friend/lover. I sense more punishment for John's father after this one (hint hint), and maybe Steve's father.
I hope you're not going to make this a John/Steve-pairing? I like Steve, but to me it's stricktly John/Lu in this fic (minus the brief John/Bally-scene).
Also liked how you display John's complete and utter lack of fear for Lu. He's independent and does what he wants, no matter who disapproves. "..Wouldn't go back to Hell, 'cause his ass was still sore.." - perfect example of John's independence.
Make John's brother suffer. Oh, please make him suffer! While his brother is out saving the world, his biggest consern is "Should I wear Prada, Gucci or Armani to work today?".
I hope you're not going to make this a John/Steve-pairing? I like Steve, but to me it's stricktly John/Lu in this fic (minus the brief John/Bally-scene).
Also liked how you display John's complete and utter lack of fear for Lu. He's independent and does what he wants, no matter who disapproves. "..Wouldn't go back to Hell, 'cause his ass was still sore.." - perfect example of John's independence.
Make John's brother suffer. Oh, please make him suffer! While his brother is out saving the world, his biggest consern is "Should I wear Prada, Gucci or Armani to work today?".
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never really cared for exhibitionism, and although it was kinda freaky to imagine hundreds of demons watching Constantine and Lucifer go at it, it was still up there in the high drool factor. Great chapter!!!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! one thing, will we be seeing Constantine take a more active role in commanding Hell? Like...making political decisions or strategic decisions and such?
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*thinks 'bout it*
If John gets more food, he gets more energy, thus he can have more sex & we get more smut...
So, 'kay, you can feed him. :P
*drolls*
Hot,Hot,Hot!! ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^.~
If John gets more food, he gets more energy, thus he can have more sex & we get more smut...
So, 'kay, you can feed him. :P
*drolls*
Hot,Hot,Hot!! ^^
Update soon, please..
Please.
^.~
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He's not human, so I would think eating and drinking is more indulgence then need. But hey, being a demon he should know gluttony. Bit of an exhibitionist. Good to see him stand up for himself 'human-plaything' indeed. Would think they recognized their own kind, at least Lucifer's consort, second in command of Hell. Oh, and he gets to piss off 'Bally'.
I like jealous Lu, or possessive, whichever, and the part about him being sick of the minion's presence and 'his precious exorcist'. Currently torturing myself wondering what John's next job is. Keep it up, new chapter, please. I said; please!
I like jealous Lu, or possessive, whichever, and the part about him being sick of the minion's presence and 'his precious exorcist'. Currently torturing myself wondering what John's next job is. Keep it up, new chapter, please. I said; please!