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very nice erotic torture. I like the element of revenge too, and the voyureistic overtones with Lucifer? Very nice. I can see many hot sex scenes in the future.

Oh, nice...*nods approvingly* The impression I got from that made sense: even though John was torturing Balthazar, he could understand and appreciate (from his new demonic point of view) why Bally did what he did, and that's why he made it pleasurable as well as painful.

Or am I completely off-track and just talking garbage whilst trying to recover from that incredibly hot scene of bloody sex?

Fantabulous as always. Now...what sort of fun could John get upto in a monastary...?

~Loki

*Faints with delight* I like. No, I love. Smutty goodness, evil John, lotsa torture....all to the good. Promise me he's going to go after that whinging Angela at some point? If Lu can't have one twin the least John can do is damn the other, right? You're wonderful hun,

~Loki

I loved the update! I can't wait to see the revenge John inflicts upon his family.

I love you. Can I just say that? So good, I'm seriously copying these things on to word-documents so I can read them if my computer crashes. Lovely revenge on his father, guess John found a new hobby. The irony does strike you, doesn't it? Compliments on your creation of Jon's 'family' (I would have liked a bit more description of the interior of the house though, 'cause I pictured them gathered around the kitchen table and that got kinda fucked up with his brother wearing the Balthazar suit). And you even managed to work in Gabriel. Can't wait for Midnite. Loved the Lu/Jon interaction during the torture. Sooo goood... Jon's really getting into the part and getting in touch with his true nature.
By the way Gabriel was a girl in the movie, so that's not different.

Yay! The sequel. *happy-dance*
You managed to get in some slight Lu/Constantine action. Not much but it's there. You make the Lucifer character believeable, not some sappy, sex-starved fool. I can actually believe this one. Jon provides some excitement to an otherwise predictable situation. No matter what, Lu can be sure that Constantine will always be a no-bull-shit, honest-to-the-point-of-rude person.
Is Jon going after his parents? Lord knows their 'help' has made him suffer. Electroshock-"therapy"(I'd be pretty annoyed)! Who the Hell does that to a kid that age? Who the Hell does that to people in general? Revenge..
Anyway it would be cool to see other people's reaction to Jon: Papa Midnite (imagine the reactions from the clientel if the now demonic Jon walked into Midnite's club, rumours will travel fast).
He could meet some know-it-all angel when he's playing with his 'new' side, and the angel could try to 'salvage' his immortal soul.
Oh! I'd really love to know how Mammon would react to finding out about Jon, and his own loss of title.
Bring Belthazar back and have Jon inform him that he out-ranks him..
He could confront Gabriel, she's human now.. Mercy and compassion aren't big words in the demonic language, and I doubt demonic Jon would just walk away.
Pick a fight with God or just make fun of him rather crudely. He's got no disrespecting the Devil, why should God be any different, particulary considering the already tense relationship between God and Constantine..
That's all I can think of for now but there's so much you could do with this.

Almost forgot.. That whole tripping the waitress with a chair and shovelling spoons of sugar into his coffee, I feel is true to the Lucifer-character of "Constantine". Nice!
Jonathan's revenge in the next chapter? Lucifer 'stumbling' over Jonathan extracting revenge in next chapter? Lu and Jon rutting amongst the dead and/or dying bastards who caused Jon pain?

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! This is simply dripping with malicious potential. I love it. Evil John just seems so...logical, almost. Definitely can't wait for the next chapter, but don't forget about 'Fading into the Light'. I like pregnant Balthazar almost as much as I like vengeful Constantine. You're the best.

~Loki

I loved it! Both the original and this sequel. You asked for ideas for John to do? Why not have him pay a visit to the witchdoctor/club owner? I don't remember his name, but it would be cool to go to him and have John reintroduced into the demon/angel circles as the Devil's Right Hand. I like your work and I can't wait for an update.