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by PaleRider

schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is sexy and interesting. hope you write more soon
schedule February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue, I like that he is being tortured in a way...lol
person RagingRaven
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on, this story is great, with an awesome plot.
You should really keep this up.
person Raven
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man! This story was getting really flowin' and then it stops. Come on, you know you want to continue this peace of marvel. Come on. PLEASE
person Chriscent
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read this whole thing. Didn't have to. But DAMN! Love the stipulations. Could you make it any more evil? Dom PROMISES before he ever sees her and THEN finds out she's going be doing things like that to him? Riding him in public might as well be considered a FIRST DATE!!! And she's going to be in his house. Oh! The sweet torture! I almost don't wanna read her getting to the house just to I can relish the naughty imaginings my own dirty mind will conjure! Torturing Dom is fun. Torturing him through his dick is just YUMMY!

Thanks for posting, thanks for writing. This is great.

Chris
person *mysterio*
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more and did I mention more? This chick's attitude is so frickin hilarious.
person Phreak
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is off the chain, I loved the interaction between the characters and Vince? Oh my gawd! He cracks me up, boy needs to get laid lol. Love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
person sandrasmit19
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter, update soon.
person sandrasmit19
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I'd love to read more.