rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story! I appreciated how the character of Cyn was quite seamlessly incorporated into the Chronicles of Riddick timeline of events on Crematoria, while still managing to carve out another, completely independent, plot line. Also, I found that the dialogue was well-tailored to its respective characters; something that's definitely a rarity in fanfic land. And lastly, I enjoyed the pacing and neatly concise format in which you allowed the story to develop...It felt like a great additional perspective to a very specific setting within the CoR story-at-large. Thanks for sharing it with us, and I hope you are inspired to write more stuff soon!

Very good! I like how you used the original 'demise of toombs' and i think Cyn fitted into the story very easilly. LOVE the name as well, very funny.

I love the story so far....(Y) I really hope that last breath was just a slight delay.
Update soon, please...(^_^)

O_O It kinda scares me how similar your story is to my story lol, but the plots are completely different so Im not complaining :XD
I love how you added that twist to the end, the main character dying. Im kinda sad that the story ends here, because I really love the plot and originality that was in this story. I hope to see another fic from you soon, and I dont want to intrude, but it would be cool if we could cowrite a story together. I mean, I'm not as experienced or skilled as you probably, but I really would like to write something with you someday. Alright, hope to see another riddick fic from you! Bye^^