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Wow, this is beyond amazing writing, it's exquisite! I should have been in bed 4 hours ago! I can't stop reading it! I just finished chapter 8 and will finish reading it tommorrow! Keep up the good work! Written very well I like how you describe everything just enough and do the flash backs that help explain everything. I love how well developed your characters and well everything is! I can tell you put alot of effort into this. I love Doom! If i could I'd hug you!

You have truly found yourself a new fan - I am absolutely amazed by your style of writing and the intertextual connections you create. I stumbled upon this story by chance, and didn't at first think I'd like it, but I was completely hooked after about three paragraphs. I love the way you present Doom. Although I haven't understood every single detail (I know the movie - and that's about it), you somehow make this world accessible.

Keep going!

Outstanding work! Real, and exactly what I would like superheros to do! Thanks for the wonderful read!

This is amazing! A well thought out and detailed piece. The philosophy of making the world mudane when super-powers are rampant is fascinating and you deal with it very, very, well. I commend you for also creating a heroine who is plausible, interesting, likable and not a mary-sue.

~R.

P.S. The smut is also stirring indeed.

Wait! It's over? Damn it! Loved the ending, by the way. Although I kind of felt like Doom was a little too reasonable about the whole "obey" thing. I guess that could just be relief, coupled "ahem" with the extra mellowness of actually gettting some for a change.... By the way, didn't he have a thing for Sue Richards? Is that why he called her shallow?

I totally still want to know why Richards thought J shouldn't marry Doom, and I trust that it's something good and jucy. Oh, and is there going to be the obligatory Marvel wedding-crash by superpowered beings? I guess it would be more unusual if there wasn't and instead there were peculiar Romany customs. Maybe Latveria has quaint folk dancing? With bells on?

I really, really can't wait for the sequel.

By the way, any hope of a oneshot or two from your other stories on this site?

I saw "The End", and panicked in that split second before I continued reading. I'm so glad this will continue in a sequel!

Aww, it's over. Darnit.

Yay, sequel!

-- Rosy the Cat

Yes, many questions answered! I love Joviana, and the still-developing dynamic between she and Victor.

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one.

I take it that whatever Mr. Fantastic was spazzy about has nothing to do with the prophesy, so I eagerly anticipate learning just what that is in future chapters. As to the portrayal of women in comics, I shall do my part by having a serious discussion with my older brother, who plans on going into either comics or cartoons after attending Cal Arts, which he'll be applying to after he gets his AA degree.

-- Rosy the Cat

I'm very entertained by the interactions between Joviana and Doom. Re the prophecy- Doom already knows of it, so I expect that will be another thing they will discuss. But it makes me think of Joviana's comment, "I was trying to move the world, with Latveria as my place to stand, and Doom as my lever…" Makes me wonder what exactly her plan *is*. And the prophecy itself is rather unspecific, isn't it? Doom's marriage will lead to the end of the world as we know it. Ack! I can't help speculating about what that may mean.
Wonderful! Can't wait for more!