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Your welcome, and thanks, I'm rather fond of it for all I've been using it since I was 10.

As for the whole super-figure thing, maybe all potential super women are born with naturally-strong back muscles? But how would that explain the way they go running and jumping everywhere. Wouldn't that *hurt*? Jiggle-factor stinks. Furthermore, how come when a super woman is all sweaty, they look like wet swimsuit models, with absolutely no other sign of being over-heated?

Loved the chapter, and I'm rather curious about Magneto's motivations as well. Do they have something to do with what Reed Richards was going to warn Joviana about? Also, I liked how Victor hit Magneto smart and where it would really hurt as his first strike. It says alot about how alike the lovebirds think, or, you know, just how much of an influence she's been on his way of thinking.

-- Rosy the Cat

P.S.: I also adore Dear Professor Xavier/Happy Phantom and If Music Be The Food Of Love! You rock.

I Love this story! I leep checking back every day or so to check on Minion. It's just so good.

Thank you!

Okay, I've been following the story for a while now--love it to bits, by the way; first found it through ff.net--and am finally feeling guilty enough to get off my tush and review. It's a really interesting story, even beyond the smut--you bring up all of these questions about comic book heroes and villians that would have never occured to me otherwise, and I heartily thank you for that. Yay Gevaisa!

-- Rosy the Cat

Though, I have noticed the whole male artists obsessed with making the heroines and villianesses look like super models. More like Barbies on steroids; honnestly...

-- Rosy the Cat

I'm really enjoying this. 'costumed adventurers'-- hee! Joviana's comments about that are very amusing.
I'm curious about how she defended herself on the island, but I'm more curious about how her relationship with Doom is progressing. Will he address her admission of love? Will Joviana promise to 'obey'? Will they have more kinky sex?
Looking forward to more!

Heh. I really don't know what to say- I'm speechless for once!! ^^ This story just keeps on getting better and better!

*showers author with compliments*

It's also nice that someone's noticed and commented on the over-the-top female (and male) figures drawn by Marvel, as much as I *love* comics, it can get slightly annouying. Having said that, sometimes I don't complain! ^^ It's great to see 'Doomsie' back too!!

u must continue... *sobs* how could you be so cruel?

I forgot to add that i like ur writing style. Either u did research or u are actually an intellectual to touch be able to mention so many different subjects accurately. Great job... WRITE MORE!

Wow! What an imaginative story...Taking a character who has never been portrayed as having any interest in sex, at least in the comics, and managing not only to give him sexuality, but to do so completely IN CHARACTER, that's quite an accomplishment. And it's so well-written, too. Even when they're not screwing, the story is still absorbing. I love your OC heroine, Joviana. She's believably smart, devious, humanly insecure about her looks, but confident in her abilities. I have to wonder if Doom secretly knows what all she's up to. More!