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Found this today and just finished Chapter 4. This is pretty intense: I am going to have to read it in small doses. Very interesting mix of charactiers, and pretty consitent presentation of the known ones - always harder to do with a complex mix like this one.

i have several comments.

First, you did a tremendous job with having so many different scifi characters in the same storr. Each one has a different universe with different rules. you mixed them good enough to be believable.

Second, I really enjoy the idea that she looks after her sons so well.

Third, I don't know how one woman would deal with that many men. One man is enough to drive me to distraction. If she can satisfy all them, she is a better fictional woman than I have seen. One man can be insatiable. 7 or 8, no way in hell.

I look forward to your later chapters.

Genna

This is a great story! It's unlike any Riddick story I have ever read. Keep up the great work!! And, Thanks