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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you need to go and edit this entire story. Choose whether you want to write in first or third person and stick to it. Also, fix your grammar. It makes it difficult to tell what you're saying.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome, awesome! I can't wait till you write more! :)
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hot, very hot. Good characters. Thanks for sharing this.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I DO HOPE YOU UPDATE.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shall you finish this?