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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaay...you have so many spelling and punctuation errors that their distracting me from the story.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait for more.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more. i like what you have so far.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are well. You had said that you had a fever at the beginning of the month. I was jut wondering how things are going and if you were going to continue this story? Have you found a beta yet? If not, then, I am willing to help! I can proof read for you. I may not be perfect, but who is?! ;) Newayz, I hope all is well. Waiting patiently!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that rocked. you must continue...PLEASE?????
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good story.
Keep it up
Keep it up
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes I am working on the 3rd and 4th chapters now, I know what I want to happen but I have had a fever the last two days and a small run in with writers block but don't worry I am working on them, just be pasoint thank you all.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whatcha doing? Are you still planning on updating this or what? Smiles lorna
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea. I also loved the idea that he was slow and it was her fault being hurt for being too eager. I hope she get her lesson, but I also love the fact that she wasn't reluctant and whiny: she was the one that wanted more first!;)
I hope you update soon. I already love our 3 predators and her personnalities (and the purring scenes near the fire were so cute!) can't wait to see what happens!
I hope you update soon. I already love our 3 predators and her personnalities (and the purring scenes near the fire were so cute!) can't wait to see what happens!