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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Give your grammar and spelling a little work though. Please update soon!! Please!!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI it's me again. I would like to say that I am looking for a beta reader. I posted on the site that this site pervides. I have yet to find one. I am working on the next two chapters and will post them when I am done with both and I find a beta reader to work in them and to fix the two chapters already up. Thank you all vary much.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was awesome and I can't wait for more VERY SOON.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is the Beta Group to help Beta's and author's connect listed at: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey.
this story seems good so far.
Damn... makes me ache thinking about it. LOL. wouldnt' walk straight for a week. HA!
okay, only thing, please, use a spellchecker, or hell, send your story to me and I'll spellcheck it for ya. :) the story would be a lot easier to read if some of the words were spelled right. But other than that it's allllll good.
Contact me if you want me to grammerize and spellerize yer fic.
(don't take my review as an example of my spelling hahaha)
this story seems good so far.
Damn... makes me ache thinking about it. LOL. wouldnt' walk straight for a week. HA!
okay, only thing, please, use a spellchecker, or hell, send your story to me and I'll spellcheck it for ya. :) the story would be a lot easier to read if some of the words were spelled right. But other than that it's allllll good.
Contact me if you want me to grammerize and spellerize yer fic.
(don't take my review as an example of my spelling hahaha)
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Keep going.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooo! I so can't wait for the next chapter! Things are really starting to get interesting! Please comtinue this story, dude. YOU RULE!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is a beta, I thought that was just the first stage of a site. I would be happy to let a spell checker read over them first if I new any. Thank you to every one I love reading the reviews.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter ! I kept checking and my vigilence was rewarded ! Good chapter. Waiting for the next one anxiously .
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kool! I really liked the story. I am interested to see where it goes. I do however, have one request. There are many starving betas out there who would love to proof read your chapters for you. The spelling mistakes are somewhat distracting. Other than that small detail, it was great and I can't wait to read more.