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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it is great keep going pleeeease. I wish I could do something like it, I have a few ideas but don't know where to start.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude! This is totally sweet so far, I can't wait till the next chapter! Predator fanfics kick ass. I really hope you write more, I'm so going to add this story to my favorites! YOU ROCK!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is going so far. I haven't thought of this plot before. I must ask you to continue it. *shivers* I can't wait for the next chappy.
Imiryoku
Imiryoku
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Nicely done. But you're grammar is bad, but I could still read it and I think you should space you're paragraphs
Other than that, nice work!
Other than that, nice work!