rate_review Reviews

well that sucks. i will keep my eyes out for an update

What!? NO!!! It can't end after that last chapter!!! How...how could you! *grabs two's mug and attempts to bang it on head of author*
I will beg and grovel on hands and knees. This story is fantastic and I would hate for it not to be updated.

Wow. Chapter three just seemed so serious, but it ended with a toothpick. What.The.Hell... That was bloody awesome!
(scampers off to read more)

A whole barrel of popcorn and a king sized crunch bar couldn't have made this story any better/. I believe chpt 4 is my favorite so far. LOVED the randomness.

No No NO! It just can't end like that...that...CLIFFHANGER! *starts slamming head into various walls*
Anyways, I personally think that the underwear designs are hilarious. I loved the blue and red pill one. haha!
Now if only people can start making them...*shifty eyes* <.< >.>

Ah! you wrote more!
I'm so happy that I could build a statue in your honor, ok maybe not, but be certain that I'm really pleased by your work.
I love everything about it (I'm such a sucker...).
I'm surprised that I am the only one who reviewed, come on people this is a great story!
Anyway, I'll be waiting your next update, trying to figure out what will happen to Keyes and the Twins (got to love them).

So, see you next chapter!
Lunitari

P.S. One more thing, if you need help writing things in French, it's my first language. So it would be my pleasure.

mmm, where should I begin...
First, I really like the twins.
Second, they're not alot of stories about them who are not pwp.
Third, I like the way you put the girl in the story, and I also like the way the three caracters interact.
I could continue....but an other chapter would be great.

Don't stop the good work.
Lunitari