rate_review Reviews

I liked your first chapter! It was well written with hardly any mistakes!! I hope to read lots more soon! ^__~

Well where's the rest of it. Please update soon.

hey, I enjoyed your first chapter. I hope you can write more soon. Also, I like mary sues just fine.

Oh, I like this very much. Even if this is a mary sue it is very good. Can't wait to read the rest.

One more thing. Not really a review. This is for all who write about this. Don't you ever wonder if David Bowie reads any of this stuff about him?

Please don't stop there. You are doing great.

Ha ha! I like the first person action and I must admit... your wirting style is very different. I have never read a story that wasn't about Sarah and Jareth, and I guess who's to say its not, right? *smiles* I look foward to the next chapter and even if I am the only one who reveiws... you can keep going for me. And I like the Jareth comments at the end... but I have to ask something. If Jareth was really in your room talking to you, would you really only be talking?? *grins* I don't think I would.

Kittenn