schedule
December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HiHi again....Do continue...Your fic is one of the best Four Brothers fic I've read....I need more...Wanna know what happens to poor Jackie...Don't stop there.... and do try to lengthen your chappies...They're pretty short....But anyway...If you can't lengthen them, at least update them yeah? I will LOVE you if you complete this ficcie with a proper ending....A fight scene would be nice...Hehe...Anyway thanks for writing such a great story...Please update!
schedule
December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story so far. I hope you do finish it. It sounds like it will be a great story when it's finished.
schedule
December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm begging you. Please continue! I need to know what happens! Please!
I'm begging you. Please continue! I need to know what happens! Please!
schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this fic so far. Four brothers is one of my favorite movies. I will be waiting for the next chapter.
schedule
December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE CRAP!!!!, THAT WAS SO GOOD, YOU'VE GOTTA FINISH IT, PLZZZZ!!!!!, THE LAST CHAPTER LEFT ME HANGIN, PLZ FINISH IT!.
schedule
December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this has a really good story line. dont' let it die off without some fight.
schedule
December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it and cant wait to see what happens next! poor Jack, please continue soon!
schedule
December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please upate soon
schedule
November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O...You can't just stop there!!!!! Please, update!!!!
schedule
November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please post more. i need to know what's going to happen to jack.