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So what crimes were commited by Ludo and Didimus?

Holy guacamole, that was uh a very worthy effort on 6your part of NC17 material. Very sexy indeed. Definately want more!!

Very Interesting thus far. I have a hard time finding Labyrinth Fics that I find unique and worth reading. I really love your style. I really hope you continue this story. I'm intrigued and horrified that my 3 favorite characters of the underground are criminals...I'm sure there must be more to their stories?! Update soon...I'm looking forward to following your writings. Great Job!

I love Hoggle's backstory here! I'm enamoured with the whole story! Well done! I must keep reading.

I'm loving this, although I hate the idea of a rapist Hoggle, so creepy! It helps move things along though, can't wait to see where you take it!

you are quite the story teller! i was somewhat perplexed about the fact that jareth used hobble over and over again in the movie in an attempt to misdirect her... but alas, you are the author, and you have power over what you write >=]

and because of the power you wield, and very skillfully i might add, i am carried along by your words... a very pleasant journey... until it stopped, abruptly, and as i hung on your every word... i fell painfully onto the sharp spikes of reality when you withheld them. it hasn't been a year yet, it can't be that difficult to continue this to completion!

PLEASE?

Please update soon, I really like the story and want to know what happens next.

I'm very curious to see how the rest of this story is all going to play out! You have a really engaging writing style and I love your descriptions of all the characters. What you've written so far has been a very interesting take on a sequel to Labyrinth. Hoggle, Didymus and Ludo as criminals?! Eek! O_O I can't wait to read more chapters!!

O_O
=After reading and re-reading the lovemaking scene in the Escher room over and over=
=Druels=
=Faints=
=Twitches=
Jareth...oooooooooooo

Okay, okay...
Im calm now...
and have my clothes back on, hehe...
and took a nice cold shower, hehe...
Comments: How can those sweet sidekicks be criminals? Nooooo!!! Also, in one of the first chapters, there is a word that ends with an F. The F doesn't belong there.
Please, do continue.