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I have no clue how yoy managed to make a story I read for kicks into something I have cried over and cheered for. Amazing eork

Dear Circle,

Please have a link to where we can read your epic work as this site has changed and rendered your stories unreadable.

Thank you for your hard work.

Rosei
Eliza.anead@gmail.com

Wow, she's come a long way! Kayla has no luck with Yautja males. I was upset with what happened between her and Ga'gan (sp), I even cried.
The first ending was pretty well done, I liked the outcome.
The second one not so much, I had high hopes for Mah'vin (sp), that is before he tried to kill her.
The last one, "Finally!!!!!!!" She ends up with the one she loves. yay! I'm glad that she ends up with Sh'lok! I'm a bit upset that Kul'vir turned out to be a cunning little cjit.

Overall well done, bravo!!!
good luck, I hope to read more

Ouch you broke my heart in chapter 11...
I couldn't read anymore :'(

I really enjoyed Kayla's story. My gosh, it had so much conflict and the like, it was almost a little hard to follow. But I was impressed with the way you developed all of you various characters. Although I like Sch'lock, I was really rooting for Maha'vin. ;) He just had a charm from the beginning that I couldn't let go of...even despite what happened between he and Kayla. And the other alternate ending involving Ne'el was a great surprise, which I also liked very much. I'll have to read the second part of your story now. Thank you for sharing this one.

Muse of Scrolls

I've just finished your completed story and must tell you that this is one of the most marvellous, wonderful, thrilling, exciting etc, etc, etc & sexy AVP stories I have ever, ever had the pleasure of reading - cudos to you, your wonderful author.

Now I'm off to read your continuation.....

it took me two days to read this entire thing. I'm taking a break and going for the sequel. :D

This story was amazing. Please write another. It was very creative to add alternate endings. I haven't seen a story on here like that. Kuddos!!!

I read this story completely. I never left a review, but since you are done I have to say job well done. It was wonderful and most importantly the alternate endings. That was never expected and it was very satisfying. I do hope you make a part 2.

I looooooooved it. Loved it. Although I am, oddly enough, more partial to the Ne'el ending... Hrm, i'd have fun with that stubborn Yautja, hohoh. But I digress. I loved this story, and I really, really hope that you will write another soon. *Much love*