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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I am so glad that she finally got to have some fun with someone. Now I am in a tizzy over who will win the fight for her. I am torn between the two. I agree Kayla's earlier thoughts of having them both! I can't wait to see where you take this! Waiting impatiently!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot, Hot, HOT HOT! WOW, I'm speechless! That was just too damned good! I still am not sure how to praise such work. After 2 minutes and I still have shivers! I sosososo CAN NOT wait for the next update. Really, really soon I hope!?
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare to stop writing this!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want Ma'havin and Kayla to work things out... I like Ga'gan... But I perfer Ma'havin and Kayla
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you setting it up to be Kayla and Maha'van in the end but how I do wish it'd either be Kul'vir and Ga'gan. Oh well you are the author and I but a lowly reader. Keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....wow...wow...i cant believe this is happening! im really excited to see Kayla nad Ga'gan together....altohugh I love Mahavin, he's getting what he deserves......but maybe they'll get together in the end.....only you know!!!!pplllleeasssee up date sooonnn!!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was checking my watch and isn't time for you to update Mhaahaahaa
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your fic, and it's one of my favorite. That is why I would like to invite to post your work on my new site. So far I am the only author, but I would like to make a site that allow people to read all kinds of fanfiction and poetry. There is no fee to join and no fee to just read. If you are interested please email me.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great, I can't wait to read the next one, keep of the good work.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all i acan say is WOW! this story is absolutely awesome. please, please finish this. i haven't read anything this good in a very long time. keep up the good work.