rate_review Reviews

Man...I wish Maha'vina and kayla would just get over butting heads. I want them to be happy together. But, it seems that she might have her eye on some one else?! Well, whatever you choose to do with this story, I will read it and love it all the same. Please continue to update.

wow, very well written. I cant wait to see more

wow....just wow...i look every day and all day to see if this has been updated....thank you for updating so quickly... do it again!!! :)

Oh wow, Ma'havin is desiring Kayla... are you going to make Kayla and Ma'havin mate in the next chapter? DO IT DO IT DO IT!

I love the story, keep up the writing and the good work. I hope to read more from you soon.

mmm wow, lol love it!

This story is great, I love that someone has actually sat down and written a very GOOD story about the Yaujta. The story is really interesting, thankfully deviating from the Scar/Lex story line, and gives an interesting take on the daily lives of the Yaujta warriors, I find this story fascinating to read and unable to wait for the updates. Please continue this story, I want to know what happens to Kayla at the dinner, surely Maha'vin as the uncle will be there, and tension will insue between her and the two males.

Anyway, keep writing, this story needs to be finished. :)

*SIGHS* Such a tease. I'm sure it was good for Kayla, but not enough for me. I want to see more. I can't wait for your next update.

Oh wow... Now things are heating up! Update quicker or I shall pass out!

ohh my goddd!!! this is sooo good....i cant wait for more!!! please....take us out of our misery and update soon!!