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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. this was cool! It just can't be the end? Please! If you get enough people wanting you to continue, will you? I want to know who these Jafren people are and what's going to happen between Kul'vir, shlok and Kayla.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your endings were great and l love your style of writing. I truly hope you continue. Big smile!!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Back again, I read your 3 endings again and now I can't make my mind up if you choose to continue with the Ne'el and Kayla one it would be cool too. Oh I don't know, it is up to you if you do or don't though isn't it.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, I really don't know if I will continue or not. I do have a lot of ideas in my head, but not yet typed them down. I have to admit I had more fun writing the Ne'el ending. It was my favorite :)
Thanks so much for the reviews!
Thanks so much for the reviews!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are finished and somehow I have a feeling of sadness... CONTINUE!!!!
Really, this was a great story and what an artsy way to end it. 3 endings. All very well done (Ne'el is my fav!)
I really hope you write a part 2. If not I'm so glad you shared this with us I will be reading it again soon!@
Cheers!!
Really, this was a great story and what an artsy way to end it. 3 endings. All very well done (Ne'el is my fav!)
I really hope you write a part 2. If not I'm so glad you shared this with us I will be reading it again soon!@
Cheers!!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Elowe^_^ I read your story on another site called http://home.earthlink.net/~karenia76116/
I'm glad to have found u here because then I can tell u how much I liked it. It was well paced and never lost it's appeal. I loved that u had alternate endings. Well props, kudos, and congrats on the story. Byes^_~*
I'm glad to have found u here because then I can tell u how much I liked it. It was well paced and never lost it's appeal. I loved that u had alternate endings. Well props, kudos, and congrats on the story. Byes^_~*
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this please continue with this line, pretty please, it will be interesting having them Sh'lok and Kayla as leaders.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story you had me hooked even at the very beginning, the last chapter though made me want to chuck my poor lappy across the room...stupid cliffhanger type things...Anways I thought I should review for once. Awesome job I'm glad I found this story when I did since I have a huge obsession with Predators, keep up the good work!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you make fall in cutesie love with sweet ol' friend Kulvir...then twist him into this vindictive prick? I'm all hurt'in here cause one of my boys isn't sweet no more. Ahem i'll get over it cause the story is great. Did you hint at a sequel (squeals)! Kayla isn't the only human on a predator ship. What of them?
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MAN- I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY. I could not dicide which ending I liked best! Please tell me that you are going to write another fic. PLEASE!! Well, tata for now. Anxiously awaiting your next masterpiece! ;)