rate_review Reviews

Excellent job.

I liked the fact you allowed jealousy to twist Kul’vir. Personally, I believe your ending with Ne’el the best. You worked some kind of hoodoo to make him even plausible as a good choice and that deserves applause. Prior to that I was leaning heavily towards the Kayla and Sh’lok thing but at the end it got way too touchy feely and flowery. Really gay…

Anyway, here’s hoping that you won’t do a sequel (because it’s flawless how it is) but that you will instead do something else totally different with another human female/Yautja pairing *ahm* Lex and Scar *ahm*.

Whatever you do, please continue writing because you have a gift.

~ K

It was good to see Maha’vin and Kayla together (I would have been getting a bit sexually frustrated by then too), but I like the ending with Ne'el better, and I can't wait to see what you do with Sh’lok.

Nice. Can't wait for the next one!

wow I'm so glad you all liked it! Happy holidays to you all.

This ending was great too, but I can't wait till the next one. You're a great writer keep it up and please update soon. ::Huggles::

You did it again! Wonderful incorporation and alterations from the first ending. Can't wait to read Sh'lok's version. Can that one include after her ritual with Sh'lok, and permission to demonstrate her special stimulation technique put to use preparing a reluctant Ne'el at his ritual? Just a thought and naughty twist!

YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CHRISTMAS EVE UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!, now i must read. can't wait for Sh'lok HAPPY HOLLIDAYS EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!

*points* You are the reason I'll sleep soundly tonight with the Maha'vin and Kayla ending(s) you wrote! MERRY CHRISTMAS

he he he ( me doing my evil laugh )

yes of course I'll update before xmas!

You're gonna update before christmas...right? please? *on hands and knees tossing bells and tinsel into air* Please?