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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I hope Shlok goes and gets his woman. They need each other, I feel and isolated and lonely as she does when I read this story.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Ne'el and Kayla. It was wonderful. Bravo! You wrote how two people which mush disdain for each other can actually get togeather! I didn't think this pairing could work, but it seriously flowed nicely. I can't wait to see the other endings.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no no no, lol
Ne'el's ending is so long it will be in three parts!
I will post the rest today, I didn't mean to confuse anyone :)
Ne'el's ending is so long it will be in three parts!
I will post the rest today, I didn't mean to confuse anyone :)
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too many loose ends. Sh'lok thinking Kayla lost his kid, and Kulvir not knowing it was his. I was actually hoping Ne'el my try being a real mate to Kayla, but I like Sh'lok better. Is there a sequel in the works? So sad, but a great story.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't see Kayla choosing mahavin for his chosen mate will surly be a threat to her and her daughter. After she finds out Kulvir delayed Sh'lok. Kulvir, I sense pain o' comin', but not an end! It can't be! (Shakes computer screaming NOOOO! Can't...breathe...without....Human Hunter to....read! Don't do this...to us....okay me! Please write another Sh'lok mating Kayla lemon before it over....I'm begging here!!!!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH COME ON!!! I'm DYING HERE!!!!! WHERE'S THE REST???????? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. OR I'M JUST GONA BUST!!!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shortest_warrior; I can, but I'm not a 100% sure yet. Depends on how everyone feels after reading the endings :)
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you write a continuation I'll do a starwars . You know write the ending first and the beginning last. since i'm writing the ending now i'll write the beginning. Come on or Spider will hound you I'll send her here I will. I warned ja. You better
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaat, the story is ending! *cries*
I was hoping for atleast 100 chapters... Haha.. =) No but seriously, you have done great so far, and I am sure your endings will be excellent too, I cannot wait to read them!
I was hoping for atleast 100 chapters... Haha.. =) No but seriously, you have done great so far, and I am sure your endings will be excellent too, I cannot wait to read them!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to have a continuation in another story, please, please, pretty please.