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for Human Hunter

by ZenRose

schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have two favorite pairings - Kayla/Maha'vin and Kayla/Sh’lok

Those are the two endings that I'm gonna love ^^

Oh and please review my story again, AFF delete it and it made me sad ;;
person Lorna
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I gotta go with the silent void here and say Kayla /MAvh'in or Sh'lock I think I spelled one wrong but that's it.Write more NOW!
P.S oh yeah please review silent void's story she lost everything SMILES
person Mal'fan
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, are you going to write a Kayla/maha'vin ending!!! (YES!)
I know there going to be Kayla/Sh'lok. Is the otherone ne'el?!!!! I really don't see how you can pull it off.
You are not gonna make us wait are you?
This is so exciting!
person artwzrd7
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The drum room was hoooott! My heart is starting to melt for Sh'lok, since he wishes to be more than a bump buddy to Kayla. Oddly he may be perfect for her. Great work getting to the deepside of your characters so to speak, without turning them into pansies.
person Anonymous
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still amazing. Keep it up. Your on a roll!
person Mal'fan
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww , I just love Sh'lok now! He's like a sensitive bully, lol
Please update soon! and more sex in the drum room! That was awesome!
person shortest_warrior
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The smell of Sh’lok, MMMMM, I loved your description, love the story. Keep it going please.
person Cookie
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so worth the wait. Great plot and flow. Is Kul'vir in love with Kayla? I'm suddenly a Sh'lok fan. Wouldn't Scar and Lex been at the home planet gathering? Giving Kayla another Oooman female to talk to maybe. Keep writing please.
person bellemorte
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I am loving it!!
I cant wait to find out what happens with Kayla and Sh’lok.
Plus I want to hear about her second baby. She is still pregnant right??
Keep the updates coming
person Nahau
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As you already know, I absolutely love your fic. But as of late my earthlink has been acting up horribly. I will update your story on my site as soon as possible. Thank you for your patience and please continue to update.