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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is the Baby Boy really dead? And is Maha'vin the father?
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’ve been following this story for a while. It’s a perfect mix of eroticism, humor and drama and worthy of publication. My friends and I really enjoy the scenes with the family. The part where it was suggested Kayla have a baby a year and she responded internally with a “hell no,” -we could not stop laughing. It amazes me that whenever we think you’re going in one direction, you pull in another and manage to keep the story from getting stale. You are so wonderfully talented, please keep writing.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!!!! It's his sister isn't it????????? I bet that's why he was lying! Am I right???
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was good. Is Kayla going to do the same thing to Maha'Vin like she did to Ku'vir? Oh please (I want the coupling Kayla-Maha'vin-Kul'Vir :: Not Maha'vin/Kul'vir but you know what I mean ^.~)
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't mind some of that seba. Or a predator or two to go with it.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kayla and maha'vin! you give us hope, will they be togeather eventually?
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I really am in love with these characters. I am also glad that almost everyone is getting along. I can't wait for the next update. Soon I hope!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked the new chapter. Can't wait for more.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - Kayla and Maha'vin moment! I was giving up hope there.. but you made me happy again ^^
Poor Kal, I hope things work out for him
Poor Kal, I hope things work out for him
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Keep going.