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*blushes*

Well, I only say it because it's true. Oh, and I so adore you, because I think Much Ado About Nothing ROCKS!!! And so do Kenneth Brannaugh and Emma Thompson! That is my absolute favoritest Shakespeare play! I'm really-really hoping that I get a chance to see it live if I get picked for my school's study abroad in England that'll be happening next year. I *heart* Much Ado About Nothing!

Anyway, my crazy lit geek moment out of the way, this was a really good chapter, and I can't wait until I get let in on all of those wonderfull little secret twists you've been hinting at since the last story. New chapters make me perky.

-- Rosy

Dear Gevaisa,

feedback... you fascinate me deeply.
Though I must admit I like the "action" more at the moment - but that is because I have to think enough at the moment for my exams, and I like to relax by reading...
And as much as I like Joviana - and I like her more every chapter, you can believe me! - but I miss your other stories!!!!!

Sincere greetings!

I have to comment: the line, "Most men aren’t worth speaking to before they turn thirty", from the previous chapter, has been playing through my head since I read it- and it makes me smile every time:)
As for this one...The recounting of Joviana in Hell was amusing, and the concept that the underworld is "an amalgam of the predominant idea of what Hell is" is very interesting. I would love for "superheroes" to hear that Victor is "not evil enough to be damned".
Also, "laws of heroics"? Hm. Is Jovi going to say something she shouldn't? I'm nervous for her.

Ack! You've got me on edge -- I need more!

Yay! Happy Victor!

...I honestly have nothing else to say, other than "Good grief, woman, you are one kick-ass writer!"

-- Rosy

Wait, what? Joviana said she lacked the two esential abilities necissary to be able to cast magic back in Minion. Why the heck would Victor possibly think she was capable? I'm confused here...

-- Rosy

P.S.: Babies! Aww, so cute!

Huh. Her "potential as a sorcerer." That could make things even more interesting.
I love how calm Victor is in dealing with Joviana's emotions. I want to see how he assuages her fears.
I'm wondering if/when Jovi's birth-mother will enter the story, and how Malice may play a role in it. Can't wait for more!

Mmm, new chapter...

But wouldn't a little Joviana/Victor baby be just the cutest lil' itty-bitty thing? Well, obviously I think so. However, I can definitely see Joviana's insecurity regarding her self-image and some aspects of her relationship with Victor being a continuing issue for a while. Poor Victor. He's gonna have to get in the habit of being comforting and giving lots and lots of hugs.

*pauses as she contemplates Victor Hugs*

Ooh...

-- Rosy

Love the story so far, i can't wait until you write more. Keep up the good work! -Poyson

Oh, and I fully support Joviana in her disdain of Johnny Storm. He is such the Annoyingly-Self-Assured Jock... The only guy out of that type I actually liked as a person back in High School was this one guy who was on both the football team and in choir. We each did a Weird Al solo for our final concert series Senior year. It would be a hoot to look back on if the acompanist hadn't ruined mine by going too fast and skipping the second and third verses. Jerk.

And yay, Doctor Strange showing up! That suggests that magic'll be thrown around!

-- Rosy