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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Victory is Joviana's! As for Valeria? ...Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewww...
At first I thought maybe Wanda cast Valeria as Victor's wife because maybe she'd admired her as a child or something to that effect. Now I'm wondering what the real Valeria did to Wanda to make her do something so nasty.
Tell? *Bambi Eyes*
-- Rosy
At first I thought maybe Wanda cast Valeria as Victor's wife because maybe she'd admired her as a child or something to that effect. Now I'm wondering what the real Valeria did to Wanda to make her do something so nasty.
Tell? *Bambi Eyes*
-- Rosy
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The WannaBeDoom family is seriously messed up. It makes me miss Victor even more. Wonderful!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you got a chapter in, and a great chapter at that. I love the way Joviana finds it so easy to manipulate the imposter and his family. SHe really is a talented and smart woman.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, the moment that we've all been waiting for, Joviana vs. Valeria. (evil cackle) I can't wait.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he loved this chppie really great like the way that they are starting to fool their imposters and they are totoally falling for it hope to see wedding bells in the near future? keep up the great writing and will look forward to another great chapter up from you soon i hope :-)
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mu-hahaha!
...Sorry, I think I've caught some of your residual "feeling evil"-ness from this chapter. I think I had an evil grin on my face all through my reading, honestly.
Anyway, obviously it was an amazing chapter, and...Waitaminnit...You evil little sneak, you! You're gonna use Joviana's smart-flirting to get her ring back, aren't you? Brilliant! You're having Joviana accomplish Victor's stated goals with minimal violence!
It's official: Joviana's/You're my hero, right up with my grandma, who is also a strong, smart woman.
-- Rosy
...Sorry, I think I've caught some of your residual "feeling evil"-ness from this chapter. I think I had an evil grin on my face all through my reading, honestly.
Anyway, obviously it was an amazing chapter, and...Waitaminnit...You evil little sneak, you! You're gonna use Joviana's smart-flirting to get her ring back, aren't you? Brilliant! You're having Joviana accomplish Victor's stated goals with minimal violence!
It's official: Joviana's/You're my hero, right up with my grandma, who is also a strong, smart woman.
-- Rosy
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Wow, what a way to set up Kristoff and House of M Doom being such a dandy; urrrgh! I can't wait for the two Dooms to match up. Keep up the excellent work.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kristoff torture! I love it! I also can't wait to see what you do to Valeria!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I contemplated doing an Igor impersonation, but decided against it. Anyway, I loved how Joviana got her chance to openly give her opinion of fake!Kristoff and use it as a way to get him in trouble with his "father". And the Cynthia exorcism? Brava!
Do you ever get the impression that Joviana and Victor would have been hell on wheels if they'd known each other as children? I do. And I can't wait until they set their sites of Valeria!
*evil cackle!*
-- Rosy
Do you ever get the impression that Joviana and Victor would have been hell on wheels if they'd known each other as children? I do. And I can't wait until they set their sites of Valeria!
*evil cackle!*
-- Rosy
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter serves three purposes: it furthers the plot, gives us an idea what Victor and Joviana's relationship must have been like before their marriage--minus the physical preening, naturally--and allows you to subtley sneak some smut in to appease the hormonal masses. "Brava, brava, bravisima!" to quote the dear Phantom.
*hums "Angel of Music" to herself*
Anyway, obviously a great job. And the whole "comic book companies must think we're stupid" bit? It seems that way, but it doesn't make any sense to me. They're always giving little footnotes when past plot-points are brought up, and they know how fanatical fans can get about memorizing facts. That's part of what makes comic-cons so successful!
-- Rosy
*hums "Angel of Music" to herself*
Anyway, obviously a great job. And the whole "comic book companies must think we're stupid" bit? It seems that way, but it doesn't make any sense to me. They're always giving little footnotes when past plot-points are brought up, and they know how fanatical fans can get about memorizing facts. That's part of what makes comic-cons so successful!
-- Rosy