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Y'know, the Valeria/Joviana/Victor thing reminds mw of somwthing I read once in a Robert Asprin novel. Something along the lines of: "It would take a tougher than average lady fair to fit into his life successfully." Valeria could very well have come to the correct and rather wise conclusion that Doom's life would be a little too much for her, and that she wasn't what he needed. After all, not that many people would be able to bring out his good side, or live comfortably with the ruthlessnes.

I predict much giddiness and possible gloating on his part. And the fake VonDooms need to be killed, preferably YESTERDAY. I remember reading about some English queen who had an annoying habbit of wheedling her way into being given various knick-knacks that caught her eye when she would visit other people's houses, but to demand another woman's *engagement ring*?! Rude, tacky, and fink-ish barely begins to cover that!

Biatch.

Also, YOU DON'T ALLOW, MUCH LESS ENCOURAGE, AN UNDER-AGED BOY TO HAVE SEX. Period. Wanda's one kinky freak to think this up, I tell you...

Otherwise, yay new chapter, and I can't wait for the innevitable Doom vs. DUR-oom smackdown. Huzzah!

-- Rosy

The House of M returns, can't wait to see how this figures into your story. I would like to see the two Dooms face off, to see which is the best...as if we don't know.

Because I'm cute and loveable and a faithfull reviewer? *bats eyelashes*

Seriously, I'm so glad things are being explained now, and Joviana's showing her Devious side, which is wonderfull. Also, BABY!!! CUTE VONDOOM BABY!!!

I vote that if it's a girl, she gets Joviana's biological grandmother's name first and her adoptive mother's name for a middle name. That would honor both of the positive matriarchical influences in her life. Or maybe Cynthia for the first girl with the grandmother's name in the middle, and Galina for a second daughter and something else for that one's middle name. I'm drawing a blank for guys' names, but I wouldn't recommend Werner as Victor seems to have named various of his efforts to better Latviria after his dad.

Ooh! Baby Borris!

Can't wait to see what you produce next.

-- Rosy

A new twist...I can't wait to see where it leads.

I was unable to check on this story for over a week, so what a nice treat it was to read this update!
The Laws of Heroics continue to amuse me. And you continue to confuse me.
How does this chapter fit in with #24? ... okay, so I have a whole list of questions about this, but I figure you'll explain everything in time, so I won't ask.
I am curious about why/how Joviana decapitated a Doombot. I love her little comments about things that have occurred over the time she has been 'Joviana'. It reminds me that she and Victor have three years of history, which we know very little about.

*shakes head at relationship stupidity*

Honestly...

Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to find out how this connects to that other chapter with He Who Shall Be Called DUR-oom. Because he's all "Dur, I'm self-centered and oblivious to those around me unless they do something that is immediately beneficial to me". Jerk. And I'd like to find out what's up with the Ben-bot, because that sounds like something interesting on the proverbial horizion. Yay!

-- Rosy

P.S.: House of M cartoon part 3 at http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/285294

Woot! You updated! It is a GREAT chapter! The only problem is....I would very much like another. I think I am becoming spoilt! ;D

Just read Minion, and despite the lateness of the hour (it's 3am here in the UK) I had to read the sequel.
Please write more soon, it's so refreshing to find a good fanfic that is intelligent, witty, sexy and in Canon!

~R.

I love Boris. I love the bonding between him and Joviana, as the two people who know and love Victor best.
Merry Christmas!